The Elven Alchemist II: The Invisibility Potion

By crabmouse

Part 1: BudgetPixel The Elven Alchemist The Elven Alchemist | crabmouse budgetpixel.com Gaven reclined in his armchair near the hearth, drawing lazily on his pipe as a curl of sweet smoke drifted toward the stone mantle. The hearth cast a radiant warmth throughout his townhouse, bathing the room in a comfortable, golden glow. Nearby, the bottle from Dark Moon Winery sat unstoppered, its Pinot Noir already working its charm on the two elven women sitting together on the floor cushions. Now thoroughly wine-warmed and lighthearted, the two were giggling together, trade-off jokes at the expense of Corvus’s pompous wizardry. Gaven remained silent, content to observe the rare moment of ease with a quiet smile. Yet beneath his relaxed posture, his watchful eye remained attuned to their conversation, ready to gently draw the line should their playful banter tip into true defiance or rebellion. He had been quietly impressed by Saria's refined palate earlier in the evening. She had articulated the vintage's profile with surprising eloquence, guiding Syvis to discern the subtle, earthy notes hidden within the Dark Moon Pinot. Gavin’s wife had initially protested when he brought home such an extravagant vintage, her frustration only subsiding once he explained the extraordinary purity of the elixir Saria had brewed. It was a familiar refrain; she had voiced that same fierce opposition years ago when he first purchased the elven herbalist. Saria had cost a fortune—a sum so vast it had shattered their meager savings. Back then, Gavin operated a modest, struggling apothecary on the sleepy outskirts of town. He had traveled into the capital on minor business—the original purpose long forgotten now—and had wandered into the auction house with no intention of making a purchase. Yet, out of curiosity, he had descended into the holding cells. There, huddled in the dim torchlight, sat Saria. She was terrified, but when Gavin struck up a tentative conversation, her guarded answers revealed a profound, almost instinctive mastery of herbalism—a genius he would still end up underestimating. Realizing she held the key to transforming his failing business, Gavin made the calculated, desperate choice to acquire her, fully aware that a beautiful elven woman would command an exorbitant price. He returned to the main hall and waited patiently as the bidding began. As anticipated, the competition was fierce, the numbers climbing at a suffocating pace. By the time the final hammer fell, the winning bid had wiped out his capital; if Saria failed to yield a return on the investment, he would be completely bankrupt. It had been the greatest gamble of his life—and it had paid off. The unmatched potency and refined perfection of her brews hadn't just saved his trade; they had built it anew, earning them this grand shop and townhouse in the heart of the city. Gavin’s quiet reflections were gently broken as his wife stepped through the doorway into the firelit room. She held a wide, steaming ceramic bowl, a warm smile gracing her face. "Dinner is served!" she announced cheerfully. Her entrance was met with enthusiastic cheers from the two merry, wine-flushed elves. Expecting the Dark Moon Pinot to grace their evening, Melissa had prepared a rich, savory wild mushroom stew specifically to complement the earthy notes of the vintage. Setting the wide serving vessel down, she took a heavy iron ladle and carefully filled three bowls. "Thank you, Melissa!" Saria and Syvis chimed together in grateful, unison praise, their earlier giggles giving way to bright, genuine smiles as the warm aroma of the stew filled the parlor. Gavin blew gently on his wooden spoon, scattering the wisps of steam before savoring a rich, flavorful mouthful. Saria might have been a master alchemist, but Melissa was indisputably a master cook; the stew was nothing short of divine. A soft smile touched his lips as he watched Saria patiently show Syvis how to savor the stew alongside the Pinot, demonstrating how the earthy mushrooms complemented the wine's rich undertones. Had Gavin been a wine connoisseur himself, he might have enthusiastically joined in on the lesson. Instead, his thoughts drifted back to the laboratory. After witnessing the extraordinary, near-flawless purity of the batch she had brewed that morning, one truth had become undeniably clear: Saria had outgrown ordinary recipes. She was ready to take on the most complex, formidable concoctions in existence—the legendary elixirs known only to the true grandmasters of the craft. When their bowls were finally clean, Gavin cleared his throat with a quiet cough, drawing the attention of both elves back to him. "Saria," he began softly, taking a deliberate drag from his pipe and letting the pale ring of smoke drift upward. Saria tilted her head, her dark eyes bright with curiosity behind her spectacles. After the remarkable purity you achieved this morning," Gavin continued, his voice steady and serious, "I believe it’s time we move on to something truly grandmaster-level. I want you to attempt an invisibility potion." Saria let out an audible gasp, her glass frozen in hand. "I know the vast majority who attempt it fail miserably," he continued, leaning forward. "And you will likely fail too—perhaps dozens of times before achieving a viable brew. But if you manage to perfect it, it will truly put our shop on the map across the entire realm. You’ll begin gathering the necessary components tomorrow." Saria’s face lit up with radiant joy. She let out a giddy squeal, clutching her wine glass with both hands as a thrill of excitement coursed through her. "I won't let you down, Master!" she promised, her voice shining with absolute determination. "I'll make the finest invisibility potion the realm has ever seen!" Gavin grinned, taking another slow drag from his pipe as he looked down at Saria. "I love your enthusiasm, Saria. I have full faith in you." Beside his leather armchair, Melissa settled onto a cushion, holding her bowl of hearty stew. She took a warm, flavorful bite, quietly savoring her own culinary handiwork before looking up at hr husband with bright eyes. An invisibility potion?" Melissa marveled, a warm smile breaking across her face. "If word gets out that you're selling those, adventurers and nobles alike will be flocking to your shop!" The morning sun broke gently over the city, casting a warm, golden light across the dining table where the four of them gathered for breakfast. Saria could barely keep her fork steady, practically brimming with nervous excitement that hummed through her entire body. Her mind was already racing through pages of ancient botanical texts, cataloging the delicate, volatile herbs required for a feat as legendary as an invisibility brew. Every crisp bite of bread was swallowed down with eager anticipation for the day ahead. Once the last of the breakfast plates were cleared, Gavin set his pipe down and took charge of the morning routine. "Syvis, head down and unbolt the front shutters," he instructed smoothly. "Get the shopfront prepped for the morning rush." Syvis nodded, offering Saria an encouraging, knowing smile before stepping out to open Gavin’s Potions for the day. Gavin then turned his attention to Saria. Reaching for the polished steel collar resting on the side table, he stepped up behind her. With a practiced, heavy metallic click, he snapped the cold band securely around her slender neck. He took hold of the connecting chain, leading her out through the front entrance into the bustling, sunlit streets of the city. As they navigated the cobblestone thoroughfares, Gavin couldn't help but notice the unmistakable lightness in Saria’s movement. There was an energetic bounce in her step, her long elven ears twitching with every ambient sound of the awakening town. Her usual timid hesitation was completely eclipsed by raw, scholarly ambition. She wasn't merely executing a chore; she was embarking on a grand endeavor. Gavin smiled faintly to himself, feeling the rhythmic tug on the chain as she practically pulled him toward their destination—the grand, secluded herbal sanctuary he co-owned with the local physician. The challenge had been laid down, and his master alchemist was more than ready to conquer it. When Gavin opened the door to the shop, he was greeted by a burst of loud, cheerful laughter. Syvis and Catrina, an elegant sorceress adorned in dark, ornate robes, were leaning over the counter, animatedly trading town gossip. Gavin made his way over to his usual chair, easing into the leather seat and drawing a slow puff from his pipe. Catrina turned her gaze toward the counter, pointing a slender finger toward a glowing crimson flask. "Is this truly a Hi-Potion?" she asked, her voice laced with pleasant surprise. Gavin grinned, taking a slow draw from his pipe as a wisp of smoke curled into the air. "It certainly is," he replied proudly. "The purity of our latest batch was exceptionally high." He took another thoughtful puff before looking up at the sorceress. "Where is your owner today?" Catrina glanced over her shoulder toward the window. "My Master is down at the Adventurer's Guild assembling a party. They're preparing an expedition into the Red Mountain Catacombs." Gavin’s eyes gleamed with immediate interest, a wider smirk touching his lips. "The Catacombs? Excellent timing. A very rare fern grows deep within those subterranean caverns—it's called Dragon Wisp." Leaning back comfortably, Gavin tapped his pipe against his palm. "Pass along a message to your Master: if his party gathers the fern while they're down there, I'll happily brew them a potent elixir in exchange, or simply pay handsomely in cold gold. Just remind him—tell him to harvest only the dark red wisps." Catrina nodded attentively, her fingers lightly adjusting the ornate metal mana-suppression collar encircling her throat. "I will be sure to pass along the message, sir," she said, tilting her head slightly. "What are the dark red wisps used for?" Gavin blew a thin stream of smoke into the air, offering a knowing smile. "They serve multiple alchemical purposes. Your Master knows his craft well enough—he’ll understand its value." Catrina paused, her eyes scanning the shopfront before turning back to Gavin. "May I speak with Saria while I am here? Gavin shook his head gently. "Not at the moment. She's out in the herbal garden gathering components." Rather than dropping the matter, the sorceress pressed on politely. "Would it be permissible for me to join her there?" A rich chuckle escaped Gavin as he rested his arm against the armrest. "It is fine by me, Catrina—provided you secure your Master's permission first." "Thank you, Sir!" she said, performing a graceful, low bow. Offering one last pleasant smile to Syvis, the sorceress offered a warm farewell and turned to exit into the sunlit street. Saria basked in the gentle warmth of the morning sun against her skin, a serene smile resting on her face as she worked in the open air. The fresh scent of soil and blooming flora was a welcome change from the heavy, distilled vapors of the backroom, making the task of gathering herbs feel like a rare breath of freedom. With practiced, delicate movements, her hands guided the stem of a deep purple blossom— Luingarn —plucking its acidic petals with care and placing them into her woven basket. It was a key reagent for the upcoming invisibility brew, and as she worked, her mind raced ahead, already mapping out the intricate brewing methods, exact temperature adjustments, and precise distillation timings she planned to employ. Creating the perfect concoction was an exercise in razor-thin margins. The target brew demanded a delicately balanced, mildly acidic profile—a notoriously difficult feat when working with Luingarn . To temper the flower, she would need to introduce orange popcorn sage, a mandatory counteragent. As a potent base, the sage would naturally reduce the acidity while injecting a critical active component into the mixture. Yet the chemistry harbored a hazardous paradox: popcorn sage naturally interacted with and neutralized Luingarn 's active properties. To prevent total cancellation, she would have to introduce Pixie Pox , a specialized mushroom capable of counteracting the sage's neutralizing effect, though the fungus itself carried a mild acidity. Proportion was everything. The formula required at least one part Pixie Pox for every ten parts sage, but could never exceed three parts. Cross that threshold, and the fungal spores would aggressively contaminate and overwhelm the entire brew. To compound the difficulty, Luingarn petals possessed a wild variance in raw acidity; the true pH would remain entirely unknown until the petals were thoroughly crushed and liquefied. Worse still, once the liquefied Luingarn met the processed sage, the resulting acid levels defied simple mathematical formulas. The final chemical state could only be discovered through direct combination and immediate testing. Time, above all, was her greatest enemy. Once the ingredients were merged, she would have a frantic ten-minute window to measure and adjust the pH before the batch stabilized—leaving no room for slow, methodical experimentation. And the margin for error was absolute: in the rare, catastrophic event that the mixture tipped into a neutral or basic state, the entire concoction would instantly become inert. Most alchemists who attempted the brew never even made it to the fermentation stage. They lost themselves in a desperate, frantic scramble to balance the pH, endlessly tweaking the ratios until their ten minutes expired or their costly supplies were entirely exhausted. With so many volatile, moving variables, such failure was practically expected. Some attempted to split the liquefied Luingarn across multiple cylinders in hopes of creating varying acidity levels to gain more control, but more often than not, it proved to be a futile effort. In the alchemical community, myths and superstitions surrounding Luingarn were endless. Rumors insisted that darker petals held higher acidity, or that longer stems yielded a more potent kick. Saria knew better—it was all nonsense. She had her own theory. The flower's intense acid acted as a natural repellent against most insects. If a petal bore a single bite mark, it meant a bug had braved a taste, hinting at a slightly milder acidity. If a petal showed multiple bite marks, the insects clearly hadn't been repelled at all—a strong indicator of a significantly lower acid content. Working with quiet focus, Saria separated her harvest into three distinct piles: untouched petals, those with one or two bite marks, and those peppered with multiple bites. If her hypothesis held true, she wouldn't be leaving her ratios to blind luck. She would have three controlled bases of varying acidity, giving her the upper hand in the chaotic mixing process ahead. Saria worked at a swift, rhythmic pace, her hands sorting the sorted Luingarn petals while her mind calculated ratios and variables in a blur of intense focus. Suddenly, a soft rustle at the garden's wrought-iron archway caught her attention. She looked up, and a squeal of pure delight escaped her lips. It was Catrina. "Catrina!" Saria gasped, scrambling up from the garden path and rushing forward to embrace her old friend. "How are you? I can't believe you're here!" Catrina smiled warmly, stepping through the sunlit gateway and lifting her cuffed hands as she took a deep, appreciative breath of the fresh air. "I'm just glad to be out in the sun for a change," she replied, her eyes scanning the vibrant flora before returning to Saria. "How is Gavin treating you? Is he treating you well? It was a dangerous question, laden with the heavy reality of their shared status. Rather than answering directly, Saria's answered, "Well, he did just buy me an expensive bottle of Dark Moon Pinot." Catrina’s nodded in affirmation. "Did he now? For the next hour, the heavy burdens of their collars and captivity melted away as the two friends fell into an easy, familiar rhythm. They gossiped eagerly, trading stories about the wild days of their past lives before the auction blocks claimed them—reminiscing over near-fatal dungeon scrapes, ancient ruins they had narrowly escaped, and bizarre magical discoveries buried deep in the wilderness. It felt like old times, a rare sanctuary of laughter beneath the open sky. The cheerful nostalgia only shifted when Catrina suddenly beamed, her gaze turning sharp with anticipation. "I can't wait," she exclaimed, her voice bubbling with excitement. "My Master is taking an expedition down into the Red Mountain Catacombs, and I'm going to explore them!" Saria let out a soft, wistful sigh, her gaze drifting toward the horizon. "I wish I could go with you," she murmured, a trace of long-buried adventuring spirit creeping back into her voice. "I miss the thrill of exploring new ruins." Catrina offered a warm, encouraging smile. "Maybe we can convince our Masters that it’s valuable for you to come along on an expedition sometime—to gather fresh herbs right at the source." Before Saria could ponder the thought, Catrina’s eyes lit up as she suddenly remembered Gavin’s errand. "Oh! Speaking of gathering—your Master mentioned the Dragon Wisp fern down in the catacombs. He said I could help collect it, but he insisted we only pick the dark red ones. Is that true?" Saria shook her head with a light chuckle. "Not quite. It doesn't actually matter if they're light or dark red. The darker ones just have a higher concentration of the active ingredient, but once you grind them down, it all yields the exact same compound. Just make sure to avoid any leaves with green on them—those aren't fully developed yet." Catrina opened her mouth to ask another question, but Saria caught herself and interrupted with a quick index finger raised. "Oh—and remember to flick the undersides of the leaves two or three times as you harvest them! That way, the spores scatter and ensure more ferns will grow for next time." "I'll make sure to do that," Catrina said, nodding gratefully. She tilted her head, her curiosity piqued. "What does he actually need them for? What kind of potion uses Dragon Wisp?" Saria’s face initially brightened with academic excitement. "Oh, it has dozens of applications! But given the current commissions..." She paused, her smile faltering slightly as the alchemical properties clicked into place. "It’ll likely be a tendril potion. Once exposed to air, the liquid rapidly solidifies into something very similar to magic root—expanding, binding, and holding fast." Catrina’s expression darkened, her brow furrowing into a troubled frown. The scholarly explanation suddenly carried a heavy, uncomfortable implication regarding who might buy such a brew, and exactly what—or who—it would be used to restrain. Catrina quickly cleared her throat, shaking off the heavy mood and changing the subject. "What are you working on right now, anyway?" Relieved by the shift in conversation, Saria's face lit up with joyful excitement. "I'm gathering Luingarn ! Gavin told me to try my hand at an invisibility potion—" She paused mid-sentence, her smile faltering. She had been on the verge of sharing how her exceptionally pure health potion had earned her this shot at grandmaster-tier work. But the words died in her throat as a cold realization settled over her. Just like the tendril potion, she thought of what kind of people in this kingdom would buy an invisibility potion, and what vile acts they would use it to commit. Catrina’s expression mirrored her sudden dread, her dark eyes dropping to the ground as a heavy frown pulled at her lips. Both friends stood in silence, sharing the exact same troubled thought. For the very first time in her life as an alchemist, Saria looked down at the basket of purple petals and seriously considered intentionally sabotaging the brew.

Comments (30)

panos

Second chapter is here. once agian, much effort has gone into this, plotting, writing, image creation. After the introduction. the plot begins to unravel. An expedtion to be undertaken, a potion that can and WILL be used wrongly to be sabotaged. Very good!

faerierealm

Okay clapped as before for Part I, but please tell me these enslaved women gain their freedom by the end of the series, yes?

crabmouse

The Elven Alchemist II: The Invisibility Potion. Warning: Includes non-consensual slavery Please clap 20 times unless you hate it! @eidrian83 @pikpoo @djangolima

crabmouse

The Elven Alchemist II: The Invisibility Potion. Warning: Includes non-consensual slavery! Please clap 20 times unless you hate it! @good_looking_archive @pocahontas @meiquro @wilt2436 @beepboopered