The Woman Who Called Elian's Name

By Martin11

Elian stopped breathing. The voice came again from somewhere far down the empty street. “Elian?” It was her mother's voice. She knew it immediately. The same gentle voice that woke her in the morning. The same voice that called her home when the sun disappeared behind Bellmare's rooftops. But her mother wasn't here. She was on the other side of the blue door. Wasn't she? Mr. Vale grabbed Elian's arm. “Don't move.” Far down the street, beneath the broken clock tower, a woman stood waiting. Still. Silent. Almost hidden by the darkness. “Elian,” she called again. And despite Mr. Vale's grip on her arm, Elian took a step forward. “Elian!” Mr. Vale pulled her back. “You don't know what that is.” “But she sounds like my mother.” Mr. Vale stared toward the woman. Something changed in his expression. He wasn't simply afraid. He recognized something. “What?” Elian asked. Before he could answer, the woman began walking toward them. Slowly. Her footsteps echoed across the empty cobblestones. One. Then another. Then another. But something was wrong. The distance between them seemed to disappear too quickly. Every time the woman stepped into darkness, she emerged several feet closer. As if the town itself were pulling her forward. Mr. Vale stepped backward. “No,” he whispered. The woman stopped. Then she lifted her hand. And waved. Exactly the way Elian's mother waved goodbye every morning. “Elian,” the woman said softly. “Come here.” Elian felt herself begin to move. Mr. Vale tightened his grip. “No.” The woman's expression changed. “Why are you keeping her from me?” Elian turned toward him. “You know her.” He remained silent. And suddenly, Elian understood. “You do know her.” The woman smiled faintly. “Tell her.” Mr. Vale closed his eyes. “I saw her once before.” The woman tilted her head. “Tell her when.” Mr. Vale opened his eyes. His voice was barely a whisper. “Forty years ago.” Elian stared at him. “That isn't possible.” “No,” Mr. Vale said. “It isn't.” The woman stepped into a faint patch of light. For the first time, Elian saw her face. And everything inside her stopped. The woman looked exactly like her mother. Not similar. Not almost. Exactly. The same dark hair. The same eyes. The same face. But younger. As though forty years had passed for everyone except her. “Mom?” Elian whispered. The woman smiled. But something about the smile made Elian afraid. “I am not your mother,” the woman said. Elian could barely speak. “But you look like her.” The woman looked toward the broken clock tower. Then back at Elian. “Because she looks like me.” Mr. Vale stepped forward. “Don't listen to her.” The woman's eyes hardened. “You still haven't told her.” “Told me what?” Elian demanded. Mr. Vale looked exhausted. Then he pointed toward the abandoned town around them. “Your mother was born here.” Elian shook her head. “She was born in Bellmare.” “No.” Mr. Vale looked around the dark streets. “She was born in this Bellmare.” Forty years ago, Mr. Vale finally told her, the blue door had appeared for the first time. In the same town square. Just as it had now. But there had been no shared dreams. No warnings. The people of Bellmare had simply opened it. And on the other side, they found another version of their town. Older. Darker. Empty. Or so they thought. Then they found the children. Elian looked at the woman. Mr. Vale's voice grew quieter. “They were living here.” “What children?” “The children who disappeared from Bellmare.” Elian remembered the stories. Children who wandered into the woods. Children who vanished near the river. Children whose names were still whispered by their families. “They were here?” she asked. Mr. Vale nodded. “But they were waiting for someone.” The woman finally spoke. “They were waiting for someone to bring them home.” Elian looked at the woman. “You were one of them.” The woman nodded. “My name was Clara.” Mr. Vale flinched. “You knew her.” Elian looked at him. Mr. Vale lowered his eyes. “I tried to save her.” Clara laughed quietly. “No.” The sound echoed through the empty street. “You tried to save yourself.” Elian stepped closer. “If you're not my mother... who are you?” Clara's expression softened. “I was supposed to be.” Elian frowned. “What does that mean?” Clara looked toward the ruined clock tower. “Your mother and I were twins.” The entire street seemed to fall silent. Elian stared at her. “My mother never had a sister.” “She doesn't remember.” Mr. Vale suddenly spoke. “She couldn't.” Clara turned toward him. “Because you made sure she didn't.” Mr. Vale finally told them everything. The children had been found. But the door was unstable. Every time someone crossed between the two Bellmares, something changed. Memories disappeared. Names were forgotten. People returned... different. The adults became terrified. They decided to close the door. But Clara was still on the other side. Elian's mother escaped. Her twin did not. “And you left her here?” Elian asked. Mr. Vale couldn't answer. “We thought the door was gone forever.” Clara smiled sadly. “But Bellmare remembers.” Then a sound echoed through the street. Knock. Everyone turned. It came from somewhere behind them. Knock. Knock. Clara's face changed. For the first time, she looked truly afraid. “That isn't the door you came through.” “What do you mean?” Elian whispered. Clara stepped backward. “There are supposed to be only two towns.” Another knock. Louder. BANG. The second door shook. Mr. Vale grabbed Elian's hand. “We have to leave.” But Clara didn't move. Elian looked at her. “Aren't you coming?” Clara stared at her. Then smiled. For the first time, it looked exactly like Elian's mother's smile. “I've been waiting forty years for someone to ask me that.” Elian reached toward her. Clara took her hand. Together, they ran. Behind them— BANG. The second door opened. None of them turned around. They reached the blue door. Mr. Vale pushed it open. Golden light flooded the street. On the other side was Bellmare. Their Bellmare. Morning sunlight. People. Voices. Life. Elian pulled Clara toward the doorway. But Clara stopped. Elian turned. “What is it?” Clara was staring behind them. Her face had become pale. “Clara?” Slowly, she looked at Elian. “There is something I never told you.” Elian tightened her grip. “What?” Clara glanced toward the darkness. Then whispered: “Your mother wasn't the only one who escaped.” A shadow moved at the far end of the street. Elian saw it first. Someone was standing there. Watching them. Clara stepped backward. “No...” The figure slowly raised one hand. And waved. Exactly the way Clara had waved when Elian first saw her. Then the stranger spoke. Not loudly. Not angrily. Softly. As though they had known each other forever. “Clara.” She froze. Elian looked at her. “Who is that?” Clara didn't answer. The figure took one step forward. And Elian finally understood. Why Clara had been waiting for forty years. Why the blue door had returned. Why Bellmare had begun dreaming. Some doors weren't opened to let people escape. Sometimes— they opened because something else had finally found the way back. And somewhere in the darkness, the stranger smiled. Then the second Bellmare went completely silent.

Tags: mystery, suspense, supernatural mystery, alternate worlds, magical realism